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State of Mind
I touch you softly and you giggle
I touch you firmly and you relax
I touch you sexual and you explode
I touch you mentally and you fall in love
I am in a state of mental fucking sexual confusion
I touch you firmly and you relax
I touch you sexual and you explode
I touch you mentally and you fall in love
I am in a state of mental fucking sexual confusion
Published 28th Feb 2012
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17th Apr 2012 10:40pm
Reminds me of the basic, stimulus and response
Also that band that I never quite got into but yet their songs get stuck in my head, Duran Duran's "The Reflex"
Also that band that I never quite got into but yet their songs get stuck in my head, Duran Duran's "The Reflex"
17th Apr 2012 10:57pm
17th Apr 2012 11:21pm
I can't tell you how long it took for me to get down the lines "Do-Re-Mi" from the Sound of Music!
17th Apr 2012 11:43pm
10th Aug 2015 5:52am
A very well written poem. I have written a poem that is about touching called "I move my hand," and this one reminds me a lot of it. Great work.
