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In a blur
There you were
In a blur
Where it all started
Times of stone
You became a time piece frozen
In a blur
Where it all started
Times of stone
You became a time piece frozen
Published 14th Sep 2021
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14th Sep 2021 4:16pm
Dear S,
I like the snapshot this poem created in my minds eye. That split second moment of recognizing something and that’s how it stays forever imprinted in the brain. Intriguing and cool write. H🌷
I like the snapshot this poem created in my minds eye. That split second moment of recognizing something and that’s how it stays forever imprinted in the brain. Intriguing and cool write. H🌷
14th Sep 2021 7:15pm
14th Sep 2021 8:06pm
it's like a branding.... burnt into memory....
poignant and the brevity is palpable....
Nice power packed, minimalism!
🌹 - 💙
B
poignant and the brevity is palpable....
Nice power packed, minimalism!
🌹 - 💙
B
