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Listen
my lungs
fill
ever so quickly
with the
silent screams
that are
fucking begging
to be released
gasping for air
as the night
takes hold of me
whispering sins
to feed my soul
sweet lies
lay upon my lips
just waiting
to be heard
are you listening?
fill
ever so quickly
with the
silent screams
that are
fucking begging
to be released
gasping for air
as the night
takes hold of me
whispering sins
to feed my soul
sweet lies
lay upon my lips
just waiting
to be heard
are you listening?
Published 14th Sep 2021
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14th Sep 2021 1:12am
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14th Sep 2021 1:56am
I like the way the bold title font forms part of the verse in the way it leads us in & sets the tone. I also like the way it ends with a jolt, lol. Clever!
14th Sep 2021 11:31pm
Anonymous
15th Sep 2021 4:28am
Listening. https://youtu.be/ImvjPBcaAcA
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
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23rd Jul 2022 9:26pm
Ah, you've been so kind with your comments. I appreciate YOU! I think at times many do so much hearing that they aren't actually listening.
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
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