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PASSED OUT TO YOU
PASSED OUT TO YOU
Frustration has passed at last
The past has been written away
as a fluke
Within one final dance with fate and
one last chance within smitten dismay
as I puke
Frustration has passed at last
The past has been written away
as a fluke
Within one final dance with fate and
one last chance within smitten dismay
as I puke
Published 4th Sep 2021
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4th Sep 2021 11:22am
An interesting path to puke. I say that with deepest admiration.
... It would seem so many paths arrive at this place.
Sorrowfully?
... It would seem so many paths arrive at this place.
Sorrowfully?
4th Sep 2021 12:05pm
Thank you for your comment.
The path of puke is never foreseen
upon the path of the bile bath
spewed upon
a silver screen
The path of puke is never foreseen
upon the path of the bile bath
spewed upon
a silver screen
4th Sep 2021 9:26pm
Hahaha, we like that dude, one good fuck up to get rid of a fuck up. Tight work
1st Oct 2021 12:41pm
It was simply a poem. I learned last night that people called in the coast guard to rescue the seven castaways from Gilligan's Island. It is fucking fiction. It is art.
