Naive

you wont find the Answers in yourself
you wont find them on the back of the shelf
you wont find them in society
& it is possible you wont find them in sobriety
but if you open the door between heart & Soul
God Will Come In And Fill you whole
& then your Soul can finally be freed
because God Is Always The Only Answer we need....

Haha imagination has left you beaten, broken and bruised so you've come to rant

it sounds to me like your a puppet on a string, and sometimes its so hard to fix a wrong that needs to be righted as many times in my own life i have been there and tried to fix a wrong...anyway thank you for your kind comment on my poem...and goodest may have a bit of the truth written in his lines he so shared with you. so i say a good poem and keep up your fantastic work

thank u for the comment!!!!!!!!!!! that's all probably very true lol!!!!!!!!!!!

This us a fantastic poem yet again.. but it never surprises me how greatly talented you truly are.. <3

lol!!!!!!! you'll make me blush lol!!!!!! Thank you so much!!!!!!!

Haha cute rhyme to me it seems sarcasm lays sublime

I really like this poem.
I think it highlights the uncertainty of our existence.

I wrote something on the same topic, but emphasizing the social and political aspects.

...Someone suffers the discomfort of living
and just try to don't think about it
taking part in a game old as syphilis
indulges in a master who take decisions for them
An escape from freedom into moral cages
of religion and discipline, where one can be annulled and cease the torment of questioning key issues about the existence.
We live in menageries where await the end
is simple, just answer yes sir...

Thanx!!!!!!!!! N nice write- it all seems so true eh lol!!!!!!!!!!!!

I liked this poem but forgive me if my interpretation is wrong of this poem I'm sorry though it seemed that this was a taught that went through your land of dark fantasies of lust and how you would be submissive though the way you ended it, I felt indicated to me the pain or  it brings to you being unfulfilled this night. If you get my interpretation , though never the less. An epic poem maybe when you have the time you could pm me and tell me what you felt writing this.

Thank you!!!!!!!!!!! And whatever you want to get from it- do!!!!!!!!!!! it means what it does to me, but if you feel different from it, that's just as great lol!!!!!!!!!!!!