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Aperitifs & friends
Published 27th Aug 2021
Author's Note
“A poem should have the touch ... the way sunlight falls on Braille.” .......silent lotus
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27th Aug 2021 2:19pm
The touch of this poem was so gentle but with an electric feel. Hugs and peace, O
28th Aug 2021 3:53am
28th Aug 2021 5:12am
Dear SL,
I agree with TO’s assessment. And for my own, your poem really felt like a gentle breeze across my face. Lovely write. H🌷
I agree with TO’s assessment. And for my own, your poem really felt like a gentle breeze across my face. Lovely write. H🌷
28th Aug 2021 10:55am
dear Honoria
thankyuuu for tiptoeing in
and loitering with my whisper and the breeze
a warm smile
silent lotus
thankyuuu for tiptoeing in
and loitering with my whisper and the breeze
a warm smile
silent lotus
29th Aug 2021 4:07pm
If any write reminds me of the work of Simon and Garfunkel, it is this. I would say Al Stewart however this has a connection both to the past and the present.
30th Aug 2021 10:38am
dear Jazz Manor
i am always grateful to hear of the array of places where one of my whispers takes an audience
thankyuuu for sharing your musical connections
a warm smile
silent lotus
i am always grateful to hear of the array of places where one of my whispers takes an audience
thankyuuu for sharing your musical connections
a warm smile
silent lotus
