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Butterfly Hue of You
A curtain -
Partially opaque,
revealed
in moments
of
micro.
A closing eye lash.
Severing
back ground depths,
as exploratory
tendencies
go
forth
Into the sound
of
baptism
by
chaos -
harmonized.
Rushing over an entirety.
Into behind
the curtain.
The mystery of you.
In my mind
I find -
One wing
Connecting
To another wing
Finding
Exploring
Undulating
currents
&
Soaring.
Published 14th Aug 2021
Author's Note
I think this is sort of about like... getting to know someone...
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14th Aug 2021 9:48am
14th Aug 2021 10:02am
14th Aug 2021 10:02am
It's a bit magical, in my opinion and definitely has such a uniquely tender, delicacy to it that makes it almost surprising at it's ability to be so resilient...
Really excellent inked thoughts and beautiful feels..
Ty for sharing
🌹 - 💙
B
(really awesome title, too!)
Really excellent inked thoughts and beautiful feels..
Ty for sharing
🌹 - 💙
B
(really awesome title, too!)
14th Aug 2021 10:13am
Thank you Blu. I really appreciate you.
(I had the strangest experience... today?/yesterday? I had a dream foretell the future, again... [this has happened to me on numerous occasions]... but like... I had the dream . Well. I slept from like 9pm to midnight. so in there somewhere. and then the dream manifested exactly, later in the evening. I think such things can be powerful to gain insight into people. which the dream gave me. but I feel like... I dont want to use such things for negative purposes. You know. but I feel like... on some level. our very cores/natures have such shadows. what to do. I do acknowledge that nature left alone, fails. things I think about. thank you for listening my Great Friend.)
(I had the strangest experience... today?/yesterday? I had a dream foretell the future, again... [this has happened to me on numerous occasions]... but like... I had the dream . Well. I slept from like 9pm to midnight. so in there somewhere. and then the dream manifested exactly, later in the evening. I think such things can be powerful to gain insight into people. which the dream gave me. but I feel like... I dont want to use such things for negative purposes. You know. but I feel like... on some level. our very cores/natures have such shadows. what to do. I do acknowledge that nature left alone, fails. things I think about. thank you for listening my Great Friend.)
Anonymous
14th Aug 2021 12:37pm
What's at stake, disembodied. Meaning is elliptical here, sometimes clipped off, like parts of a sentence or phrase elided:
in moments of micro.
Into behind
the curtain.
The way the closing of the eye "severs" the object from "the background depths."
Like the 2 wings lacking a body in the middle.
Interesting!
in moments of micro.
Into behind
the curtain.
The way the closing of the eye "severs" the object from "the background depths."
Like the 2 wings lacking a body in the middle.
Interesting!
16th Aug 2021 5:14am
14th Aug 2021 6:44pm
16th Aug 2021 5:15am
Thank you my dear-dear friend. I appreciate you beyond the heights and the depths....
15th Aug 2021 11:59am
Love this ... its structure ... its flow ... its message ... like sleepwalking while awake ... the wondering ... the imagining ... this has a Pablo Neruda feel to it ... especially the closing eyelash ... well penned Cipher ... a definite keeper ...
16th Aug 2021 5:18am
Such profound insight, Seer Poetess. My most heart felt gratitude for these profound & beautiful insights. They really connect to the work in an almost supernatural way!
Seriously... Thank you Lil.
Seriously... Thank you Lil.
