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a criminal mind

beautiful daughter  
loving wife  
a trusted friend  
So much to so many!  
But, evil reduces all that's splendid  
to its basest elements.  
 
Along with the richness in her mind,  
her humor, and kindness in her heart,  
she carried attributes that could satisfy  
the most primal urges in the most  
deceptive of humans.  
 
On a single careless night,  
she was pierced…  
pierced by a piece of lead  
manufactured to kill game with efficiency.  
She felt only the shock of sound as it passed the edge of her lovely skin and came  
to rest within a cavity never breached by violence or even a surgeon’s knife.  
 
Was it a lapse in judgment? She'd never strayed before. She was so trusting.  
 
Investigators learned that she'd been pierced in another way  
by the assailant before her death.  
Evidence showed it to be consensual.  
 
Her grieving husband was robbed of her life  
and the joys he took in the body  
she’d shared with only him before that night.  
 
Two miles from the noise and flashing lights,  
another man nursed his drink.    
He felt a tumbling of emotions as he replayed the night in his head.  
fear  
elation  
regret  
and a sense of satisfaction  
the satisfaction of accomplishing something final and significant with his life.
Written by LostViking (Lost Viking)
Published | Edited 11th Jun 2023
Author's Note
The twisted criminal mind is an enticing and puzzling subject. Based loosely on a news report I read.
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