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HEART-SHAPED HOLE
Love surprises us
Like a heart-shaped hole
In the sidewalk
You trip and fall in
Like a heart-shaped hole
In the sidewalk
You trip and fall in
Published 25th Jul 2021
Author's Note
This is essentially a reboot of an older poem.
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25th Jul 2021 2:36am
26th Jul 2021 00:34am
25th Jul 2021 4:24am
Dear S,
I love the idea and the image of this poem. Made me smile in its truth. Most love does creep up like an unexpected hole. I wish mine was a heart shaped hole that would have been really cool.
Lovely piece. H🌷
I love the idea and the image of this poem. Made me smile in its truth. Most love does creep up like an unexpected hole. I wish mine was a heart shaped hole that would have been really cool.
Lovely piece. H🌷
26th Jul 2021 00:34am
25th Jul 2021 11:26pm
26th Jul 2021 00:34am
