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Tired of It All
Tired of the pain, tired of the lies.
Tired of the games, tired of the good-byes.
I don't want those "I'm sorry"s.
They are just the same ole stories.
It's time I finally set you free.
Because you'll be the one missing me!
Tired of the games, tired of the good-byes.
I don't want those "I'm sorry"s.
They are just the same ole stories.
It's time I finally set you free.
Because you'll be the one missing me!
Published 24th Feb 2012
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24th Feb 2012 4:28pm
I see a ryme scheme you are trying to use, and you could take it farther. Donīt worry so much about ryhming at then end of the lines, and try to focus more on off-ryhme and internal ryhme. Adjust the ryme schemes to the structure of your form rather thsn the ohter way around
24th Feb 2012 7:18pm
24th Feb 2012 7:29pm
