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I love used to loose

to say I love the rain
or I love trains
could I survive emotional
if I never seen these thing again
so loving rain or loving train
isn't real love it a like thing
don't mistake love and like
those kind of loves won't sustain
or keep you warm at night
you need human love to comfort
to get you through the rough part of life
the love of trains and rain will never do
so stop cheapening the I love things to  
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