deepundergroundpoetry.com
Show your thunder
Dark and gloomy curtains closed
Neither of us fully clothed
Tits and ass almost exposed
Swollen clit waiting to be nosed
On my tippy toes legs apart
Please present your work of art
Plough your meat in like a dart
Leg on the table means real deep- That's smart
Thunder rages and so do we
Painting the walls inside my pussy
Moans and thrusts pleasing me
Now please baby, get down on your knees
Pitter patter as the rain showers down against the window
I love fucking while it thunders for your info
As lightning strikes please punish this nympho
And shower me with Your rain as I know you felt my intro
Scent of sex in the air like fertile wet sand
Bodies DE energized dick in hand
Pussy banged
Testicals slammed
Love bites fanged
Thunderously rammed
Sighs with only word being god-damn
Neither of us fully clothed
Tits and ass almost exposed
Swollen clit waiting to be nosed
On my tippy toes legs apart
Please present your work of art
Plough your meat in like a dart
Leg on the table means real deep- That's smart
Thunder rages and so do we
Painting the walls inside my pussy
Moans and thrusts pleasing me
Now please baby, get down on your knees
Pitter patter as the rain showers down against the window
I love fucking while it thunders for your info
As lightning strikes please punish this nympho
And shower me with Your rain as I know you felt my intro
Scent of sex in the air like fertile wet sand
Bodies DE energized dick in hand
Pussy banged
Testicals slammed
Love bites fanged
Thunderously rammed
Sighs with only word being god-damn
Author's Note
I could fall in love with a tree when thunder rages... It makes me realize how small i really am...
The intensity kills me i think.... feeling the thunder inside making your soul shake
The intensity kills me i think.... feeling the thunder inside making your soul shake
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 14
reading list entries 3
comments 18
reads 600
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
Re. Show your thunder
1st Jul 2021 10:17am
That's a powerful write, vivid and energetic full of fire and passion
Great write young lady, great read
Love and light
Ron x
Great write young lady, great read
Love and light
Ron x
0
Re: Re. Show your thunder
1st Jul 2021 10:19am
Re: Re. Show your thunder
1st Jul 2021 10:21am
Missed you too, its awesome to see you writing your fire again
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
0
Re: Re. Show your thunder
1st Jul 2021 10:22am
Re: Re. Show your thunder
1st Jul 2021 10:45am
Awesome find your own power and own that shit lol
BE STRONG BE BEAUTIFUL AND BE YOU
never forget
Love and light
Ron x
BE STRONG BE BEAUTIFUL AND BE YOU
never forget
Love and light
Ron x
0
Re: Re. Show your thunder
1st Jul 2021 10:49am
Re. Show your thunder
1st Jul 2021 12:01pm
A vividly descriptive poem that erects images in the mind's eye. I don't typically suggest any changes to other poet's poems but I do have a suggestion for this one. I think you meant thrust instead of trust in the 3rd stanza and I also think that the "FYI" in the 4th throws off the rhyme scheme. May I suggest dropping FYI and replace it with "just so you know"? I think that would flow better.
1
Re: Re. Show your thunder
1st Jul 2021 1:12pm
Re. Show your thunder
1st Jul 2021 12:46pm
Re: Re. Show your thunder
1st Jul 2021 1:05pm
Re. Show your thunder
I ass-ume the lights are off so a bolt of lightning silhouettes your "tits and ass almost exposed"
Gave me a jolt! Nice post
Gave me a jolt! Nice post
0
Re: Re. Show your thunder
1st Jul 2021 1:04pm
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
1st Jul 2021 2:56pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. Show your thunder
1st Jul 2021 3:07pm
Re. Show your thunder
1st Jul 2021 5:18pm
Nice. Thunder during sex is awesome and you captured the energy in the pace of this poem.
0
Re: Re. Show your thunder
1st Jul 2021 6:02pm
Re. Show your thunder
22nd Aug 2021 10:26pm
When it rains that has always been my best time to fuck. I really enjoyed this beautiful.
0
Re. Show your thunder
16th Mar 2022 7:25pm
Make a vivid scene of sex during a thunderstorm. In England it used to be a superstition that having sex during one would help conception.
0