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I'll be Gone in the Dark
I’ll be gone in the dark
won’t look before I leap into
the street bare bodied
I cannot be sure of my safety
under the empty sky
hidden under the porch
of my neighbour,
clasping hands together
over lips
hoping sirens
will halt at my home,
pull my family from danger
before I hear another scream.
won’t look before I leap into
the street bare bodied
I cannot be sure of my safety
under the empty sky
hidden under the porch
of my neighbour,
clasping hands together
over lips
hoping sirens
will halt at my home,
pull my family from danger
before I hear another scream.
Published 25th Jun 2021
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25th Jun 2021 3:45pm
25th Jun 2021 8:09pm
For some reason this piece doesnt leave my mind... I keep remembering it. Like it haunts me in a good way.
25th Jun 2021 9:18pm
wow!! Incredible compliment for me, dear friend. Thank you so much for taking the time to come back and respond as you did. I sincerely appreciate your comments and appreciate that you did this. Was definitely in a haunting mood when writing this piece, and so glad you like it. Hoping you have a great weekend.
I appreciate you, ursa 💜
I appreciate you, ursa 💜
25th Jun 2021 9:19pm
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26th Jun 2021 2:28am
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26th Jun 2021 6:59pm
Thank you Bon_Mot, I appreciate you comment and that you have stopped by!
Have a great day, ursa 💜
Have a great day, ursa 💜
26th Jun 2021 3:16pm
This one grabbed me ... was arresting ... held me till the end ... well penned ...
26th Jun 2021 7:00pm
Thank you, dear friend. I sincerely appreciate you stopping by, and your comment. Means a lot. Hope you're having a nice day, ursa 💜
26th Jun 2021 4:17pm
All of your poems are A+ but this one moved to the top of the list with A+++. Hugs and peace, oral
26th Jun 2021 7:01pm
27th Jun 2021 3:52am
Dear U,
Eeeeeekkkkkk! Frightful things sometimes are dreams. This was a thrilling nail biter for sure! I feel left with a cliff hanger and want to wake up with everyone safe in their beds! Then I want to go and have a huge breakfast. Intense write that leaves a lingering fear and a desire to keep looking over my shoulder 😉 well done.
H🌷
Eeeeeekkkkkk! Frightful things sometimes are dreams. This was a thrilling nail biter for sure! I feel left with a cliff hanger and want to wake up with everyone safe in their beds! Then I want to go and have a huge breakfast. Intense write that leaves a lingering fear and a desire to keep looking over my shoulder 😉 well done.
H🌷
29th Jun 2021 12:38pm
