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No Ambiguity
The softness of this woman’s skin
that I, in subtle, indexed touch,
have traced the markings of desire upon,
now lures me to discovering
if all or any of the insides of her nether parts
possess the same such thing
and if the feel of them
will send me reeling with
a hungering that I would need to satisfy.
They are. It does.
And so I find my prudish sense
that I should stop myself
engaging in the further plumbing
and the sampling of her moistening depths,
once strong, is gone.
that I, in subtle, indexed touch,
have traced the markings of desire upon,
now lures me to discovering
if all or any of the insides of her nether parts
possess the same such thing
and if the feel of them
will send me reeling with
a hungering that I would need to satisfy.
They are. It does.
And so I find my prudish sense
that I should stop myself
engaging in the further plumbing
and the sampling of her moistening depths,
once strong, is gone.
Published 21st Jun 2021
Author's Note
This is to show how J-Z might have gone about speaking of exploring the beauty of a woman rather than the way he tried to do in his supposedly metaphorical "The Beauty of a Flower".
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21st Jun 2021 2:48am
21st Jun 2021 4:18am
He keeps telling me that I know nothing about poetry and despite the fact that what I post adheres to his ideas of what a writing must contain in order for to be poetry, he says more often than not that what I post are nor poems.
21st Jun 2021 8:00am
I suppose not, but some people take him seriously. And he all too often smears me as an incompetent writer, so I feel a need to respond -- manly by writing things that take up his "ideas" and show how they might be set out without the things that plague his submissions, namely grammar gaffes, deixis, solecisms, clunky meter, awkward, imageless, pompous, declamatory, and question begging sentences, I really can't stand folks who think it is impossible for them to write poorly, who say they want "honest criticism", but really want only praise, and who in effect find any criticism of their poetic prowess tantamount to blasphemy.
21st Jun 2021 1:07pm
Yeah. I try to be careful with my expectations. I say what i mean and accept the rest be it bad or good. Much respect for doing what u love sir. I am but a wannabe but i do love poetry.
