Belongingness

we ARE evolving
just a wee bit too slooooooooooow for my patient tolerance, i think

Dear T,

Such an imperative thought. Belongingness. Your poem made me think about this and I think we all belong. I wish we could all get a long. That would be nice.
I agree with VirgiliusMaro’s assessment of the universe being perfect. I think your poem is so very thoughtful and has me reflecting on humankind and our behavior toward each other. Well done. H🌷

For me,
in this spill,
i was meditating more on the Universe's 2 personalities:

Harmony & or vs Chaos

but i now see how all of the above can be view as perfect

now the challenge for me is to feel what You and VirgiliusMaro have gleaned from my tiny puddle of thought.

I enjoyed the comparison.  Yet, I don't believe the is universe is perfect but a well orbiting machine.  If that orbit goes wrong well it can have a catastrophic outcome... like people.

i am in agreement with You about the universe not being perfect
but i stray sleepily from the concrete abstract that it is a machine.

Delighted You perused the simile contain, within and without.

appreciate You and Your visit.

appreciate Your philosophical share

When we finally see the interconnectedness and interdependence of all things...the Dao jigsaw comes together. Great spiritual piece T.

Peace...Harry

i just want all my friends and family to awaken to what You just said!!!

but narrow thinking
be it from
family lore
family beliefs
family

& without courage, might not ever happen.

It's not a shock why most black sheep of families awaken faster than the herd.

You get me!!

i truly believe my zen Buddhism is a meld between Chinese Buddhism and Taoism.

thank You for reading and sharing and for the RL add

Yes my friend...when Buddhism found its way into China and met Daoism, particularly the teachings of Zhuangzi...Chan (Zen) Buddhism) was born. I practiced Zen for some 30 years, loved the writings of Huang-po and Linji and the Japanese Zen master, Dogen. After discovering, The Book of Zhuangzi, I found the practice of Wu-Wei as the perfect dao for me.
Peace...Harry

A great sublime poem with thought-provoking muse. Kudos!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

We all belong brother.

Yeah we do --
scientifically and spiritually

Great sublime poem in brevity. Dust or stardust wow! Kudos!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too

Great job Tallen... How did I miss this... love the crisp brevity... the poignancy...