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Midday (part 2)
embracing the sensual contours
of earth's innocent beauty
with tender possessiveness
of intimate lovers knowing
their partners secret desires
sunlight arouses
earth beckons
the dance of eons
of yearning and unrestrained hunger
not with the fumbling shyness
of morning love
but midday's uninhibited passion
of maturing sensuality
and teasing caresses
prolonging the exquisite release
the orgasm of life
of earth's innocent beauty
with tender possessiveness
of intimate lovers knowing
their partners secret desires
sunlight arouses
earth beckons
the dance of eons
of yearning and unrestrained hunger
not with the fumbling shyness
of morning love
but midday's uninhibited passion
of maturing sensuality
and teasing caresses
prolonging the exquisite release
the orgasm of life
Published 14th Jun 2021
| Edited 15th Jun 2021
Author's Note
Forging a link between 2 existing poems while matching tempo and temperament of both was a painfully slow and frustrating process. Starting, stopping, and giving up multiple times, I find myself enamored with this [hopefully] finished version. There is an anonymous dedication for this poem. So thank you finding beauty in the first two parts and hoping I could write a trinity.
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14th Jun 2021 7:36pm
14th Jun 2021 11:03pm
You are most kind, far kinder than I deserve. I am so please you have found value in my humble poetry, you set the bar almost unassailably high. I did not realize until recently the honor implied by inclusion to a poets reading list. You give kindness and honor that can never be repaid.
15th Jun 2021 7:21pm
Ahhh!
Perfection in joining Morning Part 1 to Evening Part 3, completing the trilogy of your mind, heart, and soul-fetching trilogy to Earth's sensually ethereal vision of sheer ecstatic wonderment … I shall never again perceive our wondrous Terra Firma the same.
Fraught with creative metaphorical imagery, the vividness of deep emotions inspired and felt, the amazement knack of gathering choice words, and arranging them in such a way they both captivate and treat the senses … VOILA!!!
Both humbly and gratefully, Dear Poet, I bow! ⁓ Richard 🍃
Perfection in joining Morning Part 1 to Evening Part 3, completing the trilogy of your mind, heart, and soul-fetching trilogy to Earth's sensually ethereal vision of sheer ecstatic wonderment … I shall never again perceive our wondrous Terra Firma the same.
Fraught with creative metaphorical imagery, the vividness of deep emotions inspired and felt, the amazement knack of gathering choice words, and arranging them in such a way they both captivate and treat the senses … VOILA!!!
Both humbly and gratefully, Dear Poet, I bow! ⁓ Richard 🍃
I occurs to me that saying ty is meaningless without context and to add context to properly convey gratitude for your inspiration would require a novel of epic proportions. However a comparison might do, I am a workman fighting to force dreams onto paper leaving behind an echo of those dreams whereas you breath life into the paper that in turns become dreams. An analogy, I'm ivy growing upon a tree while you are jump into a hole of the tree and pop out another hole. My question is "how did you get from here to there instantaneously?" So this is the context when I compare your writing to magic and I'm elated that you find a little magic within my own writing. So, thank you.
I hope 3rd times the charm for this rewrite.
I hope 3rd times the charm for this rewrite.
18th Jun 2021 5:37pm
Indeed,
It is, My Fine Poet Friend.
Ya know? To do what you and I do requires a distinct difference in basic nature. It is this very sort of varied wandering balance that allows each of our styles to shine as brightly as we do … then, add all the various styles of all the poets and poetesses, and the site really comes alive, eh?
I salute Us, M'Keen-Minded Syr ⁓ "KLINK!"🥂
It is, My Fine Poet Friend.
Ya know? To do what you and I do requires a distinct difference in basic nature. It is this very sort of varied wandering balance that allows each of our styles to shine as brightly as we do … then, add all the various styles of all the poets and poetesses, and the site really comes alive, eh?
I salute Us, M'Keen-Minded Syr ⁓ "KLINK!"🥂
