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Eden Intentional
Published 6th Jun 2021
Author's Note
Bette Midler knew her shit.
Written for the Haiku Group’s June theme: Roses.
Written for the Haiku Group’s June theme: Roses.
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6th Jun 2021 2:13am
A very good western haiku. The seeming oxymoron of “fiercely delicate” is great.
6th Jun 2021 3:18am
Dear L,
I love your last line. Right on!
This is a pretty delicate poem with a lot of moxy! H🌷
I love your last line. Right on!
This is a pretty delicate poem with a lot of moxy! H🌷
7th Jun 2021 2:28am
I agree with both commenters above me. This is delicate and well done. I absolutely adore “fiercely delicate.”
14th Jun 2021 1:43am
Love Midler! Independent, sexy woman. Loved the crisp write and lovely setting.
11th Jul 2021 00:17am
