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Twilight Descending
a sacred space exists
where sleepy, fading sun
and vibrant, awakening moon
share the same warm spring sky;
nodding sweetly, they whisper
one to another in buttery ochres
and hushed blue-gray tones;
the first of the fireflies arrive
to wink at them both, knowingly
where sleepy, fading sun
and vibrant, awakening moon
share the same warm spring sky;
nodding sweetly, they whisper
one to another in buttery ochres
and hushed blue-gray tones;
the first of the fireflies arrive
to wink at them both, knowingly
Published 24th May 2021
Author's Note
Sending gratitude for a beautiful day.
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24th May 2021 4:07am
Dear L,
Piggy backing on your light. It was a beautiful day today. I’m glad you experienced as well.
And your new hair style is stunning. Although honestly, you can wear any style your cheekbones ...such a gift.
Great and giving write. H🌷
Piggy backing on your light. It was a beautiful day today. I’m glad you experienced as well.
And your new hair style is stunning. Although honestly, you can wear any style your cheekbones ...such a gift.
Great and giving write. H🌷
24th May 2021 4:25am
It was, indeed ~ I spent nearly the whole day out on my deck, enjoying the sunshine. Thank you, and thank you 💜💜
28th May 2021 6:48pm
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31st May 2021 1:18am
31st May 2021 6:10pm
31st May 2021 6:21am
I hope the braying donkeys are part of that imagery too. I'm adding them, in my head.
31st May 2021 6:11pm
4th Jun 2021 6:59pm
LUNA! i love this. absolutely adore it. i've been waiting for the lighting bugs. they make the night magical.
4th Jun 2021 7:57pm
12th Jun 2021 7:35pm
What a beautiful scene you capture.
Great work. Looking forward to reading more! 👍👌😉
Great work. Looking forward to reading more! 👍👌😉
14th Jun 2021 5:04am
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10th Jul 2021 5:45pm
I always enjoy seeing them two up in the sky for a brief moment (changing shifts).
"they whisper
one to another in buttery ochres" states it beautifully.
Well penned dear Luna.
"they whisper
one to another in buttery ochres" states it beautifully.
Well penned dear Luna.
10th Jul 2021 9:50pm
It always brings me joy to see the sun and moon sharing the same sky, even if just for a moment. I appreciate your support so much, thank you Wally!
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