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Morning (part 1)
the sensual caress of sunlight
slowly running hands of light
over the breasts and pelvis
of a shy and virgin earth
a slow awakening response
the earth trembling in pleasure
with the creation of life
and passion of a new day
a spontaneous awakening of love
within the endless embrace of morning
slowly running hands of light
over the breasts and pelvis
of a shy and virgin earth
a slow awakening response
the earth trembling in pleasure
with the creation of life
and passion of a new day
a spontaneous awakening of love
within the endless embrace of morning
Published 31st May 2021
| Edited 14th Jun 2021
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Ahhh! 🔆
The perfect prelude to your beguiling poem, "Evening" … when "Part 2" is completed, wedding all three into one whole would create a masterpiece ménage à trois of sheer poetic wonderment, that even the most accomplished amongst us would find skillfully adept and captivating.
What is astounding surprising to me, Syr, is that I am lucky enough to be the first to review both of these outstandingly creative, original pieces.
Again, fraught with wonderfully visual, vivid metaphor, emotional timbre, smoothly versed lines and breaks, along with a captivating aural beauty few amongst us could pen, it's a downright envious pleasure..
Ever-gratefully, I thank you for your generous sharing, so richly scribed and shared for our enjoyed.
Bless you your Morning, Daylight Gifts, and Evening! ⁓ Richard 🍃
PS: If you recall, please, send me notice of your Part 2 … I will greatly appreciate that. : )
The perfect prelude to your beguiling poem, "Evening" … when "Part 2" is completed, wedding all three into one whole would create a masterpiece ménage à trois of sheer poetic wonderment, that even the most accomplished amongst us would find skillfully adept and captivating.
What is astounding surprising to me, Syr, is that I am lucky enough to be the first to review both of these outstandingly creative, original pieces.
Again, fraught with wonderfully visual, vivid metaphor, emotional timbre, smoothly versed lines and breaks, along with a captivating aural beauty few amongst us could pen, it's a downright envious pleasure..
Ever-gratefully, I thank you for your generous sharing, so richly scribed and shared for our enjoyed.
Bless you your Morning, Daylight Gifts, and Evening! ⁓ Richard 🍃
PS: If you recall, please, send me notice of your Part 2 … I will greatly appreciate that. : )
