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Beyond comparison, You
The warm aroma
guided
by your illuminating essence
brings me tranquility
The sound of singing birds
could never come close
to your sweet serenade
guided
by your illuminating essence
brings me tranquility
The sound of singing birds
could never come close
to your sweet serenade
Published 18th May 2021
Author's Note
I know this is short, but I am in English class right now.
I hope its okay, I really tried messing around with words I haven't used before.
This is my third poem!
I hope its okay, I really tried messing around with words I haven't used before.
This is my third poem!
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18th May 2021 7:27pm
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4th Jun 2021 5:08pm
Excellent poem. You obviously are very talented, so go for it...the sky is not the limit, there is still outer-space. Hugs and peace, Oral
7th Jun 2021 1:13pm
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