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My Love
Sometimes my Love
My feelings
Are like a billowing surge
Thoughts and feelings tumbling forth
In silence
Without a word
A flood my heart cannot contain
Like the pelting rain of heaven
The swift beating of my heart
And they
Tumultuously
All for you conspiring
And I
Lost within this dream distilled
Transfixed
To all else blind save you
Who stills the very air
And by whose grace
Time surrenders to forever
As our souls dance within love's gaze
Entranced
Scare remembering to breathe
My Love
What is love
If not spellbound moments
Which the swirl of emotions seek to claim
As I desire by softest touch
Passion
My tongue to free
To again find words in whispers
Sweet tellings that still fall short
Save spoken within a kiss
Gifted from my heart
My feelings
Are like a billowing surge
Thoughts and feelings tumbling forth
In silence
Without a word
A flood my heart cannot contain
Like the pelting rain of heaven
The swift beating of my heart
And they
Tumultuously
All for you conspiring
And I
Lost within this dream distilled
Transfixed
To all else blind save you
Who stills the very air
And by whose grace
Time surrenders to forever
As our souls dance within love's gaze
Entranced
Scare remembering to breathe
My Love
What is love
If not spellbound moments
Which the swirl of emotions seek to claim
As I desire by softest touch
Passion
My tongue to free
To again find words in whispers
Sweet tellings that still fall short
Save spoken within a kiss
Gifted from my heart
Published 15th May 2021
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15th May 2021 5:51am
Dear AJ,
This is exactly what I’m saying! As soft and lovely as silk. “ Sweet tellings that still fall short
Save spoken within a kiss
Gifted from my heart” seriously! That’s lovely. I only know Neanderthals who wouldn’t be able to cogitate anything as civilized as this. H🌷
This is exactly what I’m saying! As soft and lovely as silk. “ Sweet tellings that still fall short
Save spoken within a kiss
Gifted from my heart” seriously! That’s lovely. I only know Neanderthals who wouldn’t be able to cogitate anything as civilized as this. H🌷
15th May 2021 12:27pm
Then its my pleasure to share such sweet words with you..old fashioned and out of place as they may seem.
“When life itself seems lunatic, who knows where madness lies? Perhaps to be too practical is madness. To surrender dreams — this may be madness. Too much sanity may be madness — and maddest of all: to see life as it is, and not as it should be!”
― Miguel de Cervantes Saavedra, Don Quixote
I seek only to write of love as I believe it should be.
“When life itself seems lunatic, who knows where madness lies? Perhaps to be too practical is madness. To surrender dreams — this may be madness. Too much sanity may be madness — and maddest of all: to see life as it is, and not as it should be!”
― Miguel de Cervantes Saavedra, Don Quixote
I seek only to write of love as I believe it should be.
16th May 2021 1:14pm
Oh. I can’t wait until you publish your work so I can carry that little book of heartfelt moments when I need a dose of your intellect, and a gentle reminder that somewhere out there, chivalric men still exist in the world !
Albeit, a rare breed.
Love the tenderness of this delicate write…
Albeit, a rare breed.
Love the tenderness of this delicate write…
16th May 2021 4:25pm
Chivalry is that to which I aspire, yet make no claim on achieving. I simply seek to be a better man ~
