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new light
When your alone in the dark
their comes new light
this light will guide you threw hard times.
and help you up when you fall
but its your choice to let this light in
or block it out.
just remember without it
your all alone.
their comes new light
this light will guide you threw hard times.
and help you up when you fall
but its your choice to let this light in
or block it out.
just remember without it
your all alone.
Published 22nd Jan 2010
| Edited 21st Jun 2013
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- Edited 26th Mar 2013 11:30am
26th Mar 2013 11:29am
"When you are alone in the dark
there comes a new light
this light will guide you through the hard times
and help you up when you fall
but it's your choice to let this light in
or block it out.
Just remember without it
you're all alone."
The flow would be helped so much more with the addition of some basic grammar and loss of text speak. It was also riddled with spelling mistakes. However, the sentiment is good. Thank you for the read.
there comes a new light
this light will guide you through the hard times
and help you up when you fall
but it's your choice to let this light in
or block it out.
Just remember without it
you're all alone."
The flow would be helped so much more with the addition of some basic grammar and loss of text speak. It was also riddled with spelling mistakes. However, the sentiment is good. Thank you for the read.
