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Oceanfront
Need a rocky shore
Maybe it’s just a want
To feel the thunder of the waves
Crashing
The clouds of salty spray mixing with my tears
Cleansing fears and doubts
Into the vast ocean to be
Free of them
‘Till they find me again
Maybe it’s just a want
To feel the thunder of the waves
Crashing
The clouds of salty spray mixing with my tears
Cleansing fears and doubts
Into the vast ocean to be
Free of them
‘Till they find me again
Published 30th Apr 2021
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30th Apr 2021 4:18pm
“The clouds of salty spray mixing with my tears”
Reminds me of something a friend said during a rough time: “salt water heals, whether sweat tears or sea.”
I like the cyclic idea in the last line.
Nicely done.
🙏
Reminds me of something a friend said during a rough time: “salt water heals, whether sweat tears or sea.”
I like the cyclic idea in the last line.
Nicely done.
🙏
