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BEAUTY
Beauty
I swear u are super sexy and so cute pliz
Im in love with your swag its such a cool thing
If u pocees a charm it has made me stupid.
Beauty
You are tempting me and that’s the true deal
I love your sweet boobs nipples and your smooth pussy
I want to make u scream uuu whiii.
Beauty
Fuck my dick hate it and squizze it rudely
Suck this lollipop its alll yours don’t screw me
Do me lady let me enjoy your tiny stew meat.
Beauty
I only want that deeper site to shoot in
I love fucking u Damn!its delicous than sushi
I can do romance with u everyday in a full week.
Beauty
I like your tue shit
Firstly lortion that beatiful pussy
Before I can eat it like a good kid.
I swear u are super sexy and so cute pliz
Im in love with your swag its such a cool thing
If u pocees a charm it has made me stupid.
Beauty
You are tempting me and that’s the true deal
I love your sweet boobs nipples and your smooth pussy
I want to make u scream uuu whiii.
Beauty
Fuck my dick hate it and squizze it rudely
Suck this lollipop its alll yours don’t screw me
Do me lady let me enjoy your tiny stew meat.
Beauty
I only want that deeper site to shoot in
I love fucking u Damn!its delicous than sushi
I can do romance with u everyday in a full week.
Beauty
I like your tue shit
Firstly lortion that beatiful pussy
Before I can eat it like a good kid.
Published 17th Feb 2012
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17th Feb 2012 10:28am
Beauty is an art. An art that leaves pictures for us to discover. When porn is tried to be used as beauty; is to use a spoon as a weapon. You could have had a really great piece without mixing beauty with sexual slang words. Not dogging your write. Just my thoughts. I know erotic sales. It's a good write.
17th Feb 2012 11:14am
IM A REPRESENTATIVE.what everyone does slowly and secretly at night i reprsent that.i couldnt have written this poem better than this but if u cant trust me show me that piece u were talking
17th Feb 2012 5:43pm
TXT SPEAK MIS-SPELLS AND SLANG USE MAKES THIS SEEM LIKE SUM KID IN 7TH GRADE WROTE IT BEFORE HE EVER HAD SEX... SO JUMBLED IT MAKES NO SENSE! EXCEPT THAT THE WRITER IS A PERV! EROTICA HAS TO BE DONE WITH TASTE AND FORM. IF NOT IT SLIPS INTO THE REHLM OF SMUT NOT POETRY
18th Feb 2012 7:24am
i consider this as a personal insult.This is an erotic poem and DU has given me the chance to do my work and u know what this poem has many reads already and is in a reading list.So choose your words well i don't like enemies in my world.
20th Feb 2012 11:05pm
Not in insult to you, poetry in general. Just take time and read what you have wrote and see if it makes sense to you. Example the poem you sent me. Plz is please coz is cause. I speak 7 different languages and it's hard to shipher this one. I know it's like beating a dead horse. Yes, your poem is in "A" reading this. As far as "your world" plz show me that on a mapp. Advice is advice. Some of us help one another, but having narcissistic view about yourself. No enemies here. Just take it for what it's worth. If it is worth nothing in "your world"! I'd move. Not a personal attack on you.
17th Feb 2012 11:48pm
18th Feb 2012 9:01am
