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Loser In Love
Loser in Love
by ~UnleashedHeathen
I suppose reality hurts the most when you`re finally aware of what you`v done
But when you`v already been suffering for a while, the pain seems as if it`s just begun
The loss of another person that you hardly knew
Always feels as if your heart has been punctured through and through
Seems you can`t possibly take it any longer until that someone comes along
Then what`s now going through your mind is what was really wrong
Doing what you can do only makes you stronger
But I doubt you`ll feel any better if you do this any longer
So take it at your own will to take my advice and use it well
Or wait around and hide your feeling until someone finds out and tells
Then the taunts and yelling begins when you still don`t know what was really wrong
Sadly the truth hurts when in reality you are the only one that has not won
by ~UnleashedHeathen
I suppose reality hurts the most when you`re finally aware of what you`v done
But when you`v already been suffering for a while, the pain seems as if it`s just begun
The loss of another person that you hardly knew
Always feels as if your heart has been punctured through and through
Seems you can`t possibly take it any longer until that someone comes along
Then what`s now going through your mind is what was really wrong
Doing what you can do only makes you stronger
But I doubt you`ll feel any better if you do this any longer
So take it at your own will to take my advice and use it well
Or wait around and hide your feeling until someone finds out and tells
Then the taunts and yelling begins when you still don`t know what was really wrong
Sadly the truth hurts when in reality you are the only one that has not won
Published 17th Feb 2012
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17th Feb 2012 2:20am
A loser doesn't know what he'll do if he loses, but talks about what he'll do if he wins, and a winner doesn't talk about what he'll do if he wins, but knows what he'll do if he loses. You have seen the loser; it's what ate you going to do about it. Great write
17th Feb 2012 2:54am
17th Feb 2012 4:01am
Let the story be told. Some of the greatest poets are dead, and their writes were wrong long ago. So it doesn't matter how lona ago it was wrote. It was still wrote. A great poem and your not dead is one way of looking at it😄
17th Feb 2012 8:01am
