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The Chair
I don't forget occassions,like the birthday of my ex. He's coming over, according to his text. I was'nt sure what to get him,to show how I care. Shopping very frantically, I found the perfect chair. I know with this gift,his attention I'll win. But I can't enjoy it,the State wont let me plug it in!
Published 16th Feb 2012
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16th Feb 2012 11:26pm
Ha ha I love this. Packs a lot of punch in every sentence. I especially like how you have spaced them apart. Adds more impact. Great read :)
16th Feb 2012 11:29pm
16th Apr 2012 1:49am
Hah I like this... Especially the last line. It's kinda humorous... Nicely done ! (:
27th May 2012 4:46am
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7th Jul 2017 3:23am
There is nothing more exhilarating than precision, and that's why I like your poem. The joys of life are certainly difficult to find, but not so much when being satisfied is that precision. An open mind always makes poetry much richer and that much more difficult. Good poetry feeds the mind even years after it has been read. Yahooooooo! I really love your poem!
