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Meat by osmosis
Butcher shop
slops, brushed
down the ginnel.
Vegan slips
in her flip flops.
slops, brushed
down the ginnel.
Vegan slips
in her flip flops.
Published 19th Apr 2021
| Edited 30th Apr 2021
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for 13 word comp
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19th Apr 2021 11:15pm
gross, but great word choices, hence the impact. I thought it was weird we both picked blood for our poems, but maybe that's what 13 brings out in us :) good luck in the comp
20th Apr 2021 9:17pm
Ha Ha yes there was a splash of blood, three in a row, yes sorry twas a bit gross, appreciate your comment and good luck to you too.
20th Apr 2021 7:58am
20th Apr 2021 9:18pm
