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THE MAGIC OF YOUR POEMS

When I see a poem posted by
YOU,
my pulse starts to race
and an
UP
starts to occur; as
I read your words
my whole body tingles
as each word flows
through my essence
and lodging in expanding
the UP you have created
to its total height wanting
to stretch for more,
Oh it feels heavenly
as I read the lines
I can't refrain my hand
from caressing my UP;
I feel the images you
create in the flow of your poem...
As the metaphors and rhymes
increase in cadence the
flow of nectar starts...
PLEASE!
Oh please my poet
write more and more
take me there, time
and time again; I confess
I am addicted...and I
don't want it to stop.
Oh, I need a dose of your
poetry several times a day,
I need relief for the UPS
you create. Oh, I want
to read and reread YOU,
Is it okay?
Written by TheOralizer
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