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(b)loom
even in our happiest moments
it hung there.
plaguing the air
following us
while still, somehow,
always beating us there.
uninhibited,
our desire magnified with every shared glance –
however quickly –
turned away like to overlook a sink of dishes
Inexorably growing
and collapsing
all at once.
A Super Nova
(a super no-go)
sometimes I see you in the shadows
cast from the light well behind me
following me
while still, somehow,
always beating me there.
it hung there.
plaguing the air
following us
while still, somehow,
always beating us there.
uninhibited,
our desire magnified with every shared glance –
however quickly –
turned away like to overlook a sink of dishes
Inexorably growing
and collapsing
all at once.
A Super Nova
(a super no-go)
sometimes I see you in the shadows
cast from the light well behind me
following me
while still, somehow,
always beating me there.
Published 11th Mar 2021
Author's Note
got some great feedback from a good friend on my last poem and made some changes, would love to hear what you guys think of this one compared to the first draft. controlled poetry isn't my strong suit so I'm trying to get some more practice with it
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