Never

Still beautiful in need

Like

need needs beauty - smiles

A submissive bliss ... perfectly poeted ...

merci you are very kind

I'm a bit torn between delving deeper into submission, or the feeling that you deserve to be punished and need to dissociate form your depressed (sad) state. The 1st line trips me up.

your comment is incredibly helpful - I now see nuances I missed and different perspectives to enrich future writing

sadness has a part to play in life - you can't always lock it inside

Damn hot poem.  Keep on writing.

glad you enjoyed

You make writing look so easy and comfortable with your sharing. I could tell you a little secret.

writing should appear
comfortable even with
the frantic scribbling

It depends on the elbow with the pen

thank you for the secret

Silly it sounds, but my muse is peace and quiet.  

Silly it sounds, but my muse is peace and quiet.  

both of those are the
best of companions. very
loud music works too

Doe's the beating of the pulse count?

I've never found that
but a spanking can give some
pause for true intrigue

Submission was never more luscious than in your darkly lit ecstasy. You write your subject as one with experience.

XoXoXo
John

I can claim to have some sir