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i lust. im sorry, but i do.
how may i support you all
such voices of Female power
how do i preach to stop and listen
to such rock and roll
and fluid grace
how do i wreck it like ralph
and pave way for your march
to lick my wounds at the potential loss of stilettos
where the feel of your true weight
applies itself to mind and flesh
trampling on stale egos
steamrolling well oiled habits
crushing them with a reckoning force
it makes me pant
seeing air quake emanation
silent roars finally heard aloud
wishing to be selfless
among them
and water their quests
and i do
but i cant stop lust
i cannot pigeon hole want
and i want to serve
and give
as long
as i am kept in and allowed my need
i must admit what i am
such voices of Female power
how do i preach to stop and listen
to such rock and roll
and fluid grace
how do i wreck it like ralph
and pave way for your march
to lick my wounds at the potential loss of stilettos
where the feel of your true weight
applies itself to mind and flesh
trampling on stale egos
steamrolling well oiled habits
crushing them with a reckoning force
it makes me pant
seeing air quake emanation
silent roars finally heard aloud
wishing to be selfless
among them
and water their quests
and i do
but i cant stop lust
i cannot pigeon hole want
and i want to serve
and give
as long
as i am kept in and allowed my need
i must admit what i am
Published 11th Feb 2021
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You move me completely with this honest and truly inspired write, p
Just, wow.
Ty so much for sharing
🌹
xo
Just, wow.
Ty so much for sharing
🌹
xo
11th Feb 2021 2:56pm
you are way too kind to me Blue. thank you.
hey, did you know they invented an entirely new blue?
https://www.nytimes.com/2021/02/05/style/blue-pigment-YInMn.html
just in case you didnt :).
hey, did you know they invented an entirely new blue?
https://www.nytimes.com/2021/02/05/style/blue-pigment-YInMn.html
just in case you didnt :).
11th Feb 2021 11:24pm
11th Feb 2021 7:20pm
we all do and I’m with you that a strong woman is something something sexy
as long as guys / girls are respectful in dealing with potential rejection etc i mean we’re all creatures of passion in one way or another
the line “wreck it like Ralph” in particular made me laugh but also gave me pause for thought because it links a sexual imagery with a protest imagery, you don’t gotta clear the streets with your dick.
overall pretty fucking fantastic
as long as guys / girls are respectful in dealing with potential rejection etc i mean we’re all creatures of passion in one way or another
the line “wreck it like Ralph” in particular made me laugh but also gave me pause for thought because it links a sexual imagery with a protest imagery, you don’t gotta clear the streets with your dick.
overall pretty fucking fantastic
11th Feb 2021 8:27pm
thank you Anna. oops i have to admit, i have not seen the movie 'wreck it ralph' but assumed i could use the simile as a reference for frenetic destructive energy used for good :) now i have to watch the movie!
11th Feb 2021 8:30pm
ah i was referring to the use of “wreck it” as a euphemism for rough sex
i don’t think it features in the film 😂
i don’t think it features in the film 😂
11th Feb 2021 8:32pm
haha! im still watching it anyway! no euphemisms were harmed in the making of this prose.
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2022 1:45pm
Hello there
I think feminism is a very contentious issue. On one hand, I have a finger very firmly in the feminist camp. On the other hand, it’s very interesting on a social level to read men’s responses to that.
Sometimes I feel like men think we are taking something away from them simply by wanting to be ourselves, and that’s not the case at all. Just like I believe that sexuality is present in everybody regardless of gender politics.
It was sensitively written, this. With respect served on all sides of the coin. Thank you for sharing.
-M
I think feminism is a very contentious issue. On one hand, I have a finger very firmly in the feminist camp. On the other hand, it’s very interesting on a social level to read men’s responses to that.
Sometimes I feel like men think we are taking something away from them simply by wanting to be ourselves, and that’s not the case at all. Just like I believe that sexuality is present in everybody regardless of gender politics.
It was sensitively written, this. With respect served on all sides of the coin. Thank you for sharing.
-M
22nd Mar 2022 3:10pm
wow, thank you for that thoughtful comment. yes, what an issue, and internal tug of war for me. even a sex positive attitude is ripe with my own projections. the years of scratching at the same dendrites...but those grooves are there...and coming in and out of those spaces of lust...it is hard not to feel conflicted and selfish...but it most certainly is what is. i appreciate your thoughts. thanks again.
