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Vacancy
This empty house this vacant couch
Searched for you all around
Paid the price played my card.
Lost it all when you fell hard.
Tripping over feelings, this bar is cold
Dying for your face, this stories been told
Beaten black and blue, I'm nothing but old.
Would like another drink but my spirits been sold.
Searched for you all around
Paid the price played my card.
Lost it all when you fell hard.
Tripping over feelings, this bar is cold
Dying for your face, this stories been told
Beaten black and blue, I'm nothing but old.
Would like another drink but my spirits been sold.
Published 4th Feb 2021
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You create a viscerally dense impact with your words that I felt deep. Your word choices "tripping over feelings" , are super connective- in my opinion.... I was drawn in, reading.
Ty for sharing, it's brave to write with such depth
🌹
xo
-B
Ty for sharing, it's brave to write with such depth
🌹
xo
-B
8th Feb 2021 1:44pm
