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Passing on

Passing on By:
A silver arrow enters into my chest.
A thick liquid fills my lungs.
Rain hits my body lightly.
I feel cold.
I look up.
All I see is darkness.
I try to breath.
My lungs are still filled with a thick liquid.
I look up again.
There s a little speck of light.
I try to pull out my arm.
My limbs are stunned.
The light gets bigger.
There is some sort of heat warming up my body.
I try to breathe again.
I get air but not much.
The light gets bigger.
I can see a figure from above.
I try to reach it with my arms.
My hand is up.
A soft warm yet firm grip is on my hand.
My body suddenly is warm.
My lungs are cleared.
I feel myself rising.
I look up again.
I see a female figure with wings slowly bringing me up.
There is light all around me.
I suddenly stop.
I look around.
I see a girl looking at me with a calming smile.
She tells e that it’s going to be better for now on.
Written by John_Smith (SeansMind1994)
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