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My skin bathed in milk chocolate call me hershey
Wanna see me down bad bitch you better off riding first class in a hearse see
They call me hellraiser the way I be raising hell
Arrest me officer it's a stick up stick up imma problem child better make sure I don't post bail
Shout out to Julia Michaels, but shit I really got issues
And one of them is how bad I wanna grabbing a gun shooting bullets the size of baghad to rip all through your bloody tissues
They say they want the old me
The take bullshit and drama from people with ease
The one who let people spit showers of insults at me for appease
Well bitch this a different day and new demon
For like a hard dick filled with semen I'm looking for a release
Wanna see me down bad bitch you better off riding first class in a hearse see
They call me hellraiser the way I be raising hell
Arrest me officer it's a stick up stick up imma problem child better make sure I don't post bail
Shout out to Julia Michaels, but shit I really got issues
And one of them is how bad I wanna grabbing a gun shooting bullets the size of baghad to rip all through your bloody tissues
They say they want the old me
The take bullshit and drama from people with ease
The one who let people spit showers of insults at me for appease
Well bitch this a different day and new demon
For like a hard dick filled with semen I'm looking for a release
Author's Note
It is kind of a short piece of representation of where my emotions lie.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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The author encourages honest critique.
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15th Jan 2021 8:04pm
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15th Jan 2021 11:24pm
Yes, you released some amazing emotions by your amazing talent. Thanks for sharing. Peace, oral
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15th Jan 2021 11:46pm
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15th Jan 2021 11:50pm
That's okay. A beautiful lady has a right to have her "emotions all over the place." Keep releasing those emotions--let you be YOU. Hugs and peace. oral
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15th Jan 2021 11:55pm
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15th Jan 2021 11:58pm
Thank you for being so gracious. Looking forward to your next poems. xo, peace, oral
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16th Jan 2021 00:00am
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16th Jan 2021 00:03am
Great! Be you...that's more than enough. No one has your beauty, talent, and opportunity. You are an amazing original. Peace, oral
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16th Jan 2021 00:04am
🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽Peace and again thank you!!!!!!!! I will definitely continue to be me.
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2nd Sep 2021 3:09am
Yes, but you seem to have magical control over them that makes your work special, A+ Hugs and peace, O)
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16th Jan 2021 2:27am
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16th Jan 2021 2:35am
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16th Jan 2021 11:43pm
I like hershey chocolate bars too🍫🍫🍫. This little piece was me entering back into this site to post.
Re. Warning
17th Jan 2021 00:05am
Yeah, you've been away a while & seems like the World is as unjust as ever!
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18th Jan 2021 00:24am
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5th Feb 2021 9:32pm
a wild one gotta let it out to look it all over and get it right action and adventure is good
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6th Feb 2021 2:32am
Yessss this is kinda like a rage poem if you look at it or my way of shattering the old me and be different. You know a no shit taking, no nonsense tolerating person. Thanks for the feedback ✊🏽✊🏽
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6th Feb 2021 6:11am
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6th Feb 2021 2:28am
Again, love the first line, "...bathed in dark chocolate..." So, so visual and perfect for lovers of chocolate, Peace, oral
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6th Feb 2021 2:34am
Yesssssss chocolate 🍫🍫🍫🍫 is good for you. It is like comfort dessert to lots of people. I know I like that line too and it is my way of boasting about my melanin. Thanks for the feedback ✊🏽✊🏽
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7th Feb 2021 5:25pm
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7th Feb 2021 5:46pm
Ooohhh yasssss😉😉 I knew that one would stick. That's my favorite line in this short, but sweet peace!! Thanks for the feedback!!✊🏽✊🏽
Re. Warning
24th Feb 2021 8:27pm
At first, I thought this was a rap all laid out and ready to clap,
I was almost afraid you might just slap
the living shit out of me, for leaving a comment on ya map
hell what could I do, that would be that
but then I saw all the positive feedback
I love how you made this piece feel like a rap. At least that was how I felt the way you worded and formatted it. It does sound like you can rap. Can you rap????
Anger is like revenge served up on a dessert platter, it is best served cold and when least expected. Awesome write my fellow poetess. You have a great talent. Never stop writing. -SOTJ-
I was almost afraid you might just slap
the living shit out of me, for leaving a comment on ya map
hell what could I do, that would be that
but then I saw all the positive feedback
I love how you made this piece feel like a rap. At least that was how I felt the way you worded and formatted it. It does sound like you can rap. Can you rap????
Anger is like revenge served up on a dessert platter, it is best served cold and when least expected. Awesome write my fellow poetess. You have a great talent. Never stop writing. -SOTJ-
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Re. Warning
18th Mar 2021 9:56pm
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19th Mar 2021 00:15am
Looks whose back 😃😃😃😃😃, welcome, welcome and welcome back!!! Yesss girl I had to show a peice of my rhyming skills. Thanks for the feedback.
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12th Apr 2021 3:24am
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12th Apr 2021 12:58pm
Thank you kindly for gracing my comment section with such positive feedback. I had fun coming up with it!✊🏽✊🏽
Re. Warning
2nd May 2021 3:10pm
I love the beginning, the mid as well as the ending of this extraordinary piece..
"Wanna see me down bad bitch you better off riding first class in a hearse see
They call me hellraiser the way I be raising hell
The take bullshit and drama from people with ease
The one who let people spit showers of insults at me for appease..
Some of the most incredible lines for me..
"Wanna see me down bad bitch you better off riding first class in a hearse see
They call me hellraiser the way I be raising hell
The take bullshit and drama from people with ease
The one who let people spit showers of insults at me for appease..
Some of the most incredible lines for me..
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Thank you dude🤎🤎🤎🤎!!! I was vibing out reading and writing this as well. Thanks for the feedback and adding me to your reading list
Re. Warning
1st Sep 2021 10:27pm
I love the first line in this poem; have read it several times. A++ Hugs and peace, O)
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2nd Sep 2021 3:07am
Yessss when I came up with this one I was like it sounds so cool that I had to use it. Hershey candy bar hearse the vehicle man it worked well in that line🤎🤎🤎
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23rd Sep 2021 10:50pm