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Guilty Conscience
I swore revenge on an old poor man today,
But not everyone agreed it should end this way.
A life, a soul, but I swear it's true,
Because he took my soul with you.
I swore revenge on an old poor man today,
But not everyone believed I could blame his decay.
My life, and soul, and love is through,
All was so strong from each point of view.
I swore revenge on an innocent man today,
It's probably my fault, but it's better this way.
But not everyone agreed it should end this way.
A life, a soul, but I swear it's true,
Because he took my soul with you.
I swore revenge on an old poor man today,
But not everyone believed I could blame his decay.
My life, and soul, and love is through,
All was so strong from each point of view.
I swore revenge on an innocent man today,
It's probably my fault, but it's better this way.
Published 7th Feb 2012
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9th Feb 2012 6:25pm
Conscience with the cruelty of love is dead
This torment the original
Beautiful plot of great conceptual
Portrayed the way of oppression
And cruelty of some hearts dead
Such as the conscience of the Dead
Give a picture of revenge and humiliation
The other for the last
On the surface of the ground
Yes, there is the quality of his representative
I talked to him a picture of great eloquence
The title poem is a wonderful
And tells a lot of conscience Dead
The rude
And word
Image material
Or
Morale
Thank you
This wonderful work
Here this afternoon to face the bad women
It also gives the word and act, and section
Picture of effective mobility
I swore revenge on the man at the age of today's poor,
But not everyone agrees that it must put an end to this method.
The life and soul, but I swear it's true,
Because he took my soul with you.
And here the wolf depositary Latif
Wolf in pregnancy
I swore revenge on the man at the age of today's poor,
But not everyone thinks that I can blame him decay.
My life, and spirit, and love is through,
It was all very strong from every point of view.
The end
They want another dramatic plot
You are shortcut
I swore revenge on an innocent man today,
It's probably my fault, but it's better this way.
Despite repeated swore
Shortened work
Could have been a little stretching
And explain more of the image of women Avenger
Great work
This torment the original
Beautiful plot of great conceptual
Portrayed the way of oppression
And cruelty of some hearts dead
Such as the conscience of the Dead
Give a picture of revenge and humiliation
The other for the last
On the surface of the ground
Yes, there is the quality of his representative
I talked to him a picture of great eloquence
The title poem is a wonderful
And tells a lot of conscience Dead
The rude
And word
Image material
Or
Morale
Thank you
This wonderful work
Here this afternoon to face the bad women
It also gives the word and act, and section
Picture of effective mobility
I swore revenge on the man at the age of today's poor,
But not everyone agrees that it must put an end to this method.
The life and soul, but I swear it's true,
Because he took my soul with you.
And here the wolf depositary Latif
Wolf in pregnancy
I swore revenge on the man at the age of today's poor,
But not everyone thinks that I can blame him decay.
My life, and spirit, and love is through,
It was all very strong from every point of view.
The end
They want another dramatic plot
You are shortcut
I swore revenge on an innocent man today,
It's probably my fault, but it's better this way.
Despite repeated swore
Shortened work
Could have been a little stretching
And explain more of the image of women Avenger
Great work
9th Feb 2012 6:40pm
Anonymous
21st Feb 2012 7:06pm
a intense poem kind of made me shutter a good poem i liked it very much..thank you for your comment on UNDERDOG i was being silly
21st Feb 2012 8:09pm
wow, I like to think I can make people react in which way lol!!!!! N silly is always good!!!!!!
