Alone

this is a tribute to my old friend. I'll never forget him.

Have something strong here
Perhaps a philosophy of life
You create a beautiful scenario
Between yourself and spirit, body and mind
With the inclusion of unknown
And draw something close to you
See you
Hear you
But do not like him
You are our rhetoric
The word
Alone
Soft whispers in my ear
Tell me What I want to hear

Like a kick in the teeth
Then i fell way beneath

I live in fear
So no one comes near

I cry my tears
And still no one hears

I don't try to ride the fence
But silence is my best defense

So if you're gonna go
Run before I know

Thank you to something beautiful and pure
Honest expression of feeling
Touch this
I feel

thank u so much tht means alot to me

wow! this is really good!

I lost a friend and this poem reminds me of him. Thanks

Thx. I've had this one for a year before I posted it.

To me, your last line is the best.  Some of the rhyme seemed forced, like "ear" and "hear." That's what most ears do.  Right? Be careful of expressions like "a kick in the teeth."  To me they are overused, trivial even.  Who hasn't been "kicked . . .?"  Keep the poetry up, though, as you have powerful potential.

Marcella1

I can tell you're a very sweet person . You should write more . This isn't bad . I was disappointed only to see two poems for you. But both are nice poems

Thx Gigi, I write alot, I just haven't posted yet. That's my goal this week. I wrote on my comp this morning.
Your greatest fear

This poem is downright beautiful. I lost a.. friend.. as well a couple of years ago, and it brings to mind the feelings I had when he died. You envoke such emotion in your poem, like great authors do. Truely amazing.

ty, I think we can all relate to losing someone

Wow, it's beautiful.