A Kiss

Because being strung along by someone with an identity crisis just isn't my thing.

On point and honest response. Kudos.  Hope you've found your someone.

Dismissed what?

It could be dual meaning - I'll let the reader decide or maybe the reader has others: (a) Why didn't you savor the moment while it was occurring, or (b) why did the relationship end by one party being cast off.

It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.. and I am quite sure the beautiful ride was worth the sweetest fall my wandering poet.. So, savor on the reminisce it sometimes brings the sweetest rewards, what an incredibly soft serenade

It is always on honor to have your words grace my submission page. Thank-you for reading and commenting; and the night in Italy.

You are humbly welcome my poet

Nice poem with a beautiful flow..👍

InDreamz, thanks for the kind words.

The morning in Italy was referred as a time zone. ...delayed because of unexpected requests of family members to run errands for them. And trying to stay focused right now

It feels bittersweet.  I love the moment and I miss the moment, and I'm sad that I didn't give the moment more value?

Right on point. Thanks for the read and comment Ljdynamic.

One of my favorites I've read so far.
Peace
Bella

Wow, thanks. Glad you enjoyed.

There are much better poets than I on this site. Enjoy exploring.

to cherish and remember each kiss and feel the void after lips separate, i dig this

Thank you for reading and commenting.

Yes, I do miss the moment after its gone.

"Don't Know What You Got (Till It's Gone)" - Cinderella

Digging the rhyme scheme.  The bliss of a kiss is powerful, looking back missing that moment is such "doh" wise words of Homer J. Simpson, enjoying your write.

LJ

Wow, a second comment from you. I like.

D'oh!  Very appropriate reference.

Haha well awesome!  I liked it that much!  I was looking for something I hadn't commented on yet and I must have missed myself scrolling through.

LJ

Beautiful words, message and illustration. :)

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed.

There is nothing as sensual as kiss.
Nothing more memorable when
it’s perfect. Nothing so missed when it gone because it a gateway to a loving future or a sweet goodbye.
Enjoyed the write
~NE~

Thank-you so much for the read and insightful comment.

It is said: "A kiss is just a kiss until you find the one you love."   Sharing that deep connection is truly magical and when it's gone, it is a very emotional time.  Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart.  This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time.  

~ Brandy

Thank you so much Brandy for the wonderful comment. As they say, Hindsight is 20 20.