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ABOUT LAST NIGHT
All-day I have been sidetracked
with flooded memories of last night.
All I can see is your full, voluptuous,
naked body slowly teasing me as
my personal and private dancer.
Your suggestive moves, rubbing
and teasing your full silky garden;
rubbing a finger in your chamber
and then teasing and tempting
me with to and back movements
to my mouth. Your breasts hanging
and swaying as fruit in the garden
of paradise. Your luscious
stomach, hips, and thighs!
Taking my hand as I stood up
you helped me in taking off
my clothes. Then, oh then, our
bodies were closer together than
our skin, pushing, grinding, teasing;
may cock was throbbing, oh was
it throbbing...then you dropped to
your knees capping my manhood
in your mouth, omg, in one suck
I exploded...oooh, never before,
I usually have the ability to last.
It was all your "fault" :).
About last night, I wonder
do I need to apologize?
with flooded memories of last night.
All I can see is your full, voluptuous,
naked body slowly teasing me as
my personal and private dancer.
Your suggestive moves, rubbing
and teasing your full silky garden;
rubbing a finger in your chamber
and then teasing and tempting
me with to and back movements
to my mouth. Your breasts hanging
and swaying as fruit in the garden
of paradise. Your luscious
stomach, hips, and thighs!
Taking my hand as I stood up
you helped me in taking off
my clothes. Then, oh then, our
bodies were closer together than
our skin, pushing, grinding, teasing;
may cock was throbbing, oh was
it throbbing...then you dropped to
your knees capping my manhood
in your mouth, omg, in one suck
I exploded...oooh, never before,
I usually have the ability to last.
It was all your "fault" :).
About last night, I wonder
do I need to apologize?
Published 7th Jan 2021
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7th Jan 2021 6:58pm
Sounds like one hell of a night!
Very erotic, especially in your descriptions of her body and great foreplay but damn, the ending came as fast as you did (in the poem!)
One thing I didn't like was the "omg". I'm just picky about text speak in poetry, again just me.
Very erotic, especially in your descriptions of her body and great foreplay but damn, the ending came as fast as you did (in the poem!)
One thing I didn't like was the "omg". I'm just picky about text speak in poetry, again just me.
7th Jan 2021 7:32pm
7th Jan 2021 7:20pm
8th Jan 2021 6:25am
That would be a night to give him memories for next day. Sensuous description of the woman, favourite sentence:
Your breasts hanging
and swaying as fruit in the garden
of paradise.
Your breasts hanging
and swaying as fruit in the garden
of paradise.
8th Jan 2021 9:24am
No need to apologise, just do it again; repeatedly, until your stamina emerges and go hard & deep, relentlessly until you’re both on the cusp of orgasmic bliss !
8th Jan 2021 1:47pm
