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Abhorrent affliction
Apprehensive atmosphere
Closed around him with
Hateful hostility
Menacingly mocking
As his autonomy
Fearfully faded
Abhorrent affliction
Creeps in from
Secretive shadows
Vainly claiming
It's conquered
Feeble frailty
Closed around him with
Hateful hostility
Menacingly mocking
As his autonomy
Fearfully faded
Abhorrent affliction
Creeps in from
Secretive shadows
Vainly claiming
It's conquered
Feeble frailty
Published 28th Dec 2020
Author's Note
About the onset of a panic attack.
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19th Jul 2021 4:40am
Anonymous
19th Jul 2021 7:13am
When I was reading the book, Ringu, which was the original Japanese novel the "Ring" horror movies were based on, the first book has a wonderfully vivid description of the onset of the demonic presence that, panic attack-style, caused first paralysis, then a heart attack in the victim.
The thing I really like about it was how the author was able to describe a completely internal (and hallucinated experience) in a tangible, down-to-earth way.
Hang in there!
Enjoyed!
The thing I really like about it was how the author was able to describe a completely internal (and hallucinated experience) in a tangible, down-to-earth way.
Hang in there!
Enjoyed!
19th Jul 2021 12:38pm
