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Re: Re. That stolen kiss
18th Dec 2020 11:45pm
Re. That stolen kiss
17th Dec 2020 11:52pm
Re: Re. That stolen kiss
18th Dec 2020 11:45pm
Re. That stolen kiss
18th Dec 2020 2:28am
Very sensual poem. Hope the first kiss made you electrified with pleasure. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. That stolen kiss
18th Dec 2020 11:47pm
glad you enjoyed each
taste of lipstick as well as
you did - onwards - smiles
taste of lipstick as well as
you did - onwards - smiles
Re. That stolen kiss
18th Dec 2020 3:27pm
Re: Re. That stolen kiss
18th Dec 2020 11:44pm
Re. That stolen kiss
23rd Dec 2020 2:03pm
The use of rhyme is consistent and well-developed. I’m not sure that the “dirty dish” analogy makes sense; how do you dance in a dish?
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Re: Re. That stolen kiss
23rd Dec 2020 3:07pm
The dirty dish can
dance with the susceptible
spoon as they run off
Smiles
dance with the susceptible
spoon as they run off
Smiles
Re. That stolen kiss
5th Jan 2021 11:47pm
You take me down the lane of stolen kisses that lead to deeper resonance within the mind body symbiosis. What a hungry boy you have made of me.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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Re: Re. That stolen kiss
12th Jan 2021 11:48am