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what you make me feel
you have so much to say yet you leave it to a couple nice words i know in your mind you think i could do better one day i will show you just how much better i can do for all it worth i could take every inche of you in my mouth and swallow you whole or get so wet you would slide in with no problem ride you to the point you would have no words but yet i just say a simple thank you when i know i have more to say
Published 5th Feb 2012
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5th Feb 2012 8:00am
I feel that you know you best;
For it is your heart inside your chest.
You may be sexually intack;
I can only imagine what your like in the sack.
I bet you can flow just a you speak;
Short and sweet as you peak.
I know that your deep I inside;
I know where my shaft can hide.
I know what you want, and need;
For lust and passion your mind may feed.
To scream out loud and be heared;
I will always be here to hear every word!!!
Great write Hun I love it. Once again short sweet and "VERY" to the point. . You pulled me in
For it is your heart inside your chest.
You may be sexually intack;
I can only imagine what your like in the sack.
I bet you can flow just a you speak;
Short and sweet as you peak.
I know that your deep I inside;
I know where my shaft can hide.
I know what you want, and need;
For lust and passion your mind may feed.
To scream out loud and be heared;
I will always be here to hear every word!!!
Great write Hun I love it. Once again short sweet and "VERY" to the point. . You pulled me in
5th Feb 2012 8:45am
thats what i was hoping for to feel your soft lips on mine to feel you hands wounder my body to expolre every inche and yes your right iam intact in fact im the best you'll ever have lol i love our lil games im fact it helps me to write
5th Feb 2012 8:59am
For I have tasted your lips of wine;
I know your beauty; even if I was blind.
I can feel you without a touch;
You don't know me, but I miss you much.
To see your eyes looking at me;
Like the clouds reflection on the sea.
I may never see you face to face, but
We have the same meeting place.
My words may help you write;
Only to make me hard...Right?
I know you will be naughty and nice;
So I will trace your body with melting ice.
I will end the poem of choice;
Only one day to hear you actull voice.
I know your beauty; even if I was blind.
I can feel you without a touch;
You don't know me, but I miss you much.
To see your eyes looking at me;
Like the clouds reflection on the sea.
I may never see you face to face, but
We have the same meeting place.
My words may help you write;
Only to make me hard...Right?
I know you will be naughty and nice;
So I will trace your body with melting ice.
I will end the poem of choice;
Only one day to hear you actull voice.
5th Feb 2012 3:16pm
as my hands wounder as i read lil poem you leave for me the thought of touching me drives me wild as you talk about melting ice and wine drenched lips to feel every lil kiss and touch of a man thats not in my bed but yet a dream of one who love to write to me as much as i love to write to him
