Sunny, Winter Days

Very sexy, seductive
Love this
Love and light
Ron xx

I needed to rework it to make more of a lullaby  to love - hope you still like it

Lovely ... Bless and love ... ..

lovely love is at the heart of this

Love the words.

I hope the rewrite helps you love them more

Your words are always so enticing...
💜 it
xo

and yet they can always be improved upon

You give it everything you got.  Keep on writing.

thank you - I will

You mate pure sexuality with lyrical beauty into a poem of extraordinary beauty. Truly an artfully crafted poem from the pen of a lusty visionary.

XoXoXo
John

Your comments are charming