Night

Night
This Night of your own you
And feel you want to tell us something
Girl who was Called and Night
At the time of pneumoconiosis
Night without clouds
You know how to use the expression here
You feel strongly
And says

Sometimes I'd go off at night
I can not follow you there
Fraught with danger and fear
So I waited patiently for the day
In the hope that it will here you want to stay
If you have ideas of what it lacks
This is the jealous night trying to steal you back
Do you promise me that you'll leave the night
Cause baby I love you with my strength

Is this passion and the power of love
Do you love to do a real passion
And become a powerful weapon
Has for us in all senses
Sleep and escape
And we do talk with the spirit
And it is up to talk of love
Is responsible for the night our secrets
Is the night master of the situation here
I feel that everything
Night mature
Sometimes it is interesting
Thank you
Intention and enjoyable
And beautiful
Although it is short
But carry a lot
Secrets

      Thank you ..  
           Akhenaten, Egypt  
        On February 05 ** 2012 after Birth

I can only hope that you like my poetry as much as I do yours. I can't type as much as you but love you and your poetry all the same.

much love sends
your queen

Thank you, Luis. You know I feel the same way about your writing. Yes when true love is felt, it will always return. :)

Wonderful rhythm and flow.... A beautiful write.

Thank you. This one came from the heart.

very moving and well written. Thank's and Peace

I am happy my poem moved you. Peace to you, too!

And sweet and delicate piece

Thank you. I am glad that you are able to see that this piece is indeed sweet as well as delicate. :)

I felt your longing in this. Tring to love someone with all your might and they don't seem to notice or want it. Sometimes people look for a love they already have. How blind.

Thank you flowergirl. When I wrote the poem I tried to articulate feelings that I have for someone, but in my case I believe this person has feelings for me too. And yes sometimes people do look for a love that they already have, because maybe the other person never made it really clear how they truly felt about the one they love.  

This is wonderful <3

Thank you. It's always a good feeling when people think my poetry wonderful! :) <3

Such soft beauty in this my friend
Touches deeply inside...