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Emotions
Like, no rivers
I'm an ocean
I stay calm
And deep
Till the phases of the Moon
Change the mood
Yet
Still I'm an ocean
With some tidal waves
Till it settles
Back to normal
Still
Ocean, I am
Ocean, I remain
I'm an ocean
I stay calm
And deep
Till the phases of the Moon
Change the mood
Yet
Still I'm an ocean
With some tidal waves
Till it settles
Back to normal
Still
Ocean, I am
Ocean, I remain
Published 12th Nov 2020
Author's Note
आमा भन्छिन्
उचाल्ने, थेचार्ने मान्छेहरु
धर्तीका छालहरु हुन्
तिमी समुद्र हुनु
Background concept image from https://marinemadness.blog/2019/12/10/how-will-climate-change-affect-waves/
उचाल्ने, थेचार्ने मान्छेहरु
धर्तीका छालहरु हुन्
तिमी समुद्र हुनु
Background concept image from https://marinemadness.blog/2019/12/10/how-will-climate-change-affect-waves/
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Anonymous
12th Nov 2020 5:12pm
यो राम्रो छ, मेरो साथी
12th Nov 2020 9:45pm
wonderful feedback, the content of the poetry is less soulful than the motivating reply of your comment.
Thank you
Thank you
12th Nov 2020 6:36pm
Beautiful. In calm awareness of oneness with all things, we are unthreatened.
13th Nov 2020 2:11pm
Dear OH,
Really restful and peaceful write. A wonderful change of pace with outside influences constantly nipping at my heals. Beautiful visual. H🌷
Really restful and peaceful write. A wonderful change of pace with outside influences constantly nipping at my heals. Beautiful visual. H🌷
13th Nov 2020 2:44pm
