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23rd Oct 2020 6:00pm
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23rd Oct 2020 6:02pm
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23rd Oct 2020 6:05pm
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23rd Oct 2020 6:14pm
You need an Eastern vacation! As long as it's not a European one! ( loved that movie! )
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23rd Oct 2020 6:16pm
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23rd Oct 2020 6:17pm
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23rd Oct 2020 7:08pm
Dear S,
I love this piece. Everything snaps into place when you can observe the hope of the next generation. Who knows, perhaps they will get it right. Lovely poem. H🌷
I love this piece. Everything snaps into place when you can observe the hope of the next generation. Who knows, perhaps they will get it right. Lovely poem. H🌷
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23rd Oct 2020 8:29pm
Thanks Honoria. I feel there are different ways to read this, and your optimistic take might be my favorite of them.
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Anonymous
24th Oct 2020 3:53pm
LOL I kind of read this as sarcastic jab at the over romanticized notion of the marriage and family.
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