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When I Was Ten
transported by a whiff of air
to my English childhood where
the future stretched away unseen
all seemed right, the world was green
humidity, my mum called 'close'
my uncle's house contained a ghost
I had a sister, two brothers too
and every day was fresh and new
now many years have come and gone
in Canada where I belong
with memories and feelings which
a whiff of air has been the switch
to cascading thoughts of what was then
before I left, when I was ten
to my English childhood where
the future stretched away unseen
all seemed right, the world was green
humidity, my mum called 'close'
my uncle's house contained a ghost
I had a sister, two brothers too
and every day was fresh and new
now many years have come and gone
in Canada where I belong
with memories and feelings which
a whiff of air has been the switch
to cascading thoughts of what was then
before I left, when I was ten
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