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New Love
He touches you like you have life’s answers tattooed on your skin in Braille.
He kisses you like the last supply of oxygen lives in your lungs.
He kisses you like the last supply of oxygen lives in your lungs.
Published 8th Oct 2020
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8th Oct 2020 6:42am
Dear L,
You write a beautiful sentiment we should all be so lucky to experience. I like the gentleness of this poem. Yet it burns with a heated passion just below the surface.
H🌷
You write a beautiful sentiment we should all be so lucky to experience. I like the gentleness of this poem. Yet it burns with a heated passion just below the surface.
H🌷
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
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19th Oct 2020 3:11am
The brevity here is really powerful. That first line in particular says a lot with few words. Thanks!
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