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Elliptical

 

You're too tentative
You feel so soft
You advertise this scruffy smoothness to others
You wither at the slightest aggravation
I feel your heart
It's......
Where did you go?
I never got to know you,
Would you like to go out on a day on the town with me?

Written by asbr808 (Anthony R)
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Author's Note
I feel like this is just an extended "Will you go out with me"
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