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lillith perhaps?
she told me she loved me because behind my arrogance she saw that i hated myself.
She saw seditiously through my stacks of skimmed through volumes, and deflated my loquacious balloon of self hypnotised glamoury before i could even spell check.
She was more impressed when i didnt have the right thing to say. With angelic reptilian eyes, she owned my madona whore complex completely and decided my role of snail or soldier with each sway of her affection.
She is just a muse i try to tell myself.
I should have known by her maternity, by her nurturing of everything that burns and forgets of tomorrow.
I should have known by the tattoo of an omega symbol on the small of her back, that this seduction pertained to more than the normal organs.
I should of known that posting my most personal psychology on the most public forum(yet ironically the most private)was her way of cackling through the stagnancy, her way of illuminating the fool.***note***
Im sure glad i remember that the fool is he who leaps first following passion ignoring embarrassment.
***note***initially posted this on facebook-hence the most public forum reference
She saw seditiously through my stacks of skimmed through volumes, and deflated my loquacious balloon of self hypnotised glamoury before i could even spell check.
She was more impressed when i didnt have the right thing to say. With angelic reptilian eyes, she owned my madona whore complex completely and decided my role of snail or soldier with each sway of her affection.
She is just a muse i try to tell myself.
I should have known by her maternity, by her nurturing of everything that burns and forgets of tomorrow.
I should have known by the tattoo of an omega symbol on the small of her back, that this seduction pertained to more than the normal organs.
I should of known that posting my most personal psychology on the most public forum(yet ironically the most private)was her way of cackling through the stagnancy, her way of illuminating the fool.***note***
Im sure glad i remember that the fool is he who leaps first following passion ignoring embarrassment.
***note***initially posted this on facebook-hence the most public forum reference
Published 30th Jan 2012
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the situation more common with the boom of internet poetry and groups... i love the way it's structured, the prose of it sweeping like poetry with the imagery and metaphors, the constant rounding down to reality. reads wonderfully aloud too... consider yourself followed. [:
6th Feb 2012 10:45pm
quite flattering i certainly appreciate it!
i often wonder if i can be heard or if im too inside my head...very welcome to hear that you seemed to have heard it
i often wonder if i can be heard or if im too inside my head...very welcome to hear that you seemed to have heard it
16th Dec 2013 2:28pm
