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Life goes on
Boys will lie
Girls will cry
Love will die
Lives will go on
Things will go wrong
Pain will last long
Friendships end
Lovers defend
Heartbreaks mend
The world will revolve
Memories dissolve
Problems resolve
Girls will cry
Love will die
Lives will go on
Things will go wrong
Pain will last long
Friendships end
Lovers defend
Heartbreaks mend
The world will revolve
Memories dissolve
Problems resolve
Published 29th Jan 2012
| Edited 30th Jan 2012
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30th Jan 2012 3:54am
well i didnt really get this poem too much.
there was not a lot of point to it on a level.
i didnt really get theend
there was not a lot of point to it on a level.
i didnt really get theend
what i was trying to get across with this poem was that you'll have troubles and you'll think its the end of your life and that you shouldnt really worry until it is really the end of your life. but i kind of get what you mean by the ending, i actually think im going to get rid of the last stanza
